Jake has worked hard to include a range of sentence types and persuasive language to convince us that we should buy a round house. A super piece of writing.
When do I move in Jake?
Latisha is our writer of the week this week. She has worked extremely hard on her presentation this lesson. She has also included a lot of the new learning from this week in her paragraphs which are organised underneath subheadings. Well done! Latisha’s next step to make her writing even better is to use sentence starters to vary her writing and to give the reader more information.
Well done to Elliott in Y4B who is writer of the week! He wrote clear, organised paragraphs outlining comparisons and differences of accounts about Boudicca. He proofread his work accurately to check for errors in punctuation and spelling and also included great detail.
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